Here is another good piece by UGA professor Peter Smagorinsky. As always, his piece is provocative and worthy of discussion.
By Peter Smagorinsky
This week, Maureen Downey published “Rockdale student: Make students work for grades and limit reliance on technology” in her AJC Get Schooled blog. The essay was written by Jennifer Lee, a 16-year-old sophomore at the Rockdale Career Academy charter school in Conyers.
Jennifer wrote what I consider to be a mature and well-reasoned essay expressing her view that technology was producing lazy minds among her peers, and that along with other “security nets” such as summer school and credit recovery, they should be removed so that students may become more responsible for their actions and their consequences.
As of noon or so on May 25, there have been 53 “comments” posted in response to Jennifer’s essay. I am moved to write today after reading all 53, not so much to react to what they say, but to comment on what they don’t say, and what that says about how readers think about public education.
First, what they do say. A wise man once opined that in reading anonymous Internet comments following op-ed pieces, you may as well stop after the first 10 or so, because everything after that either serves as a soapbox speech on the author’s favorite (and only) topic, or involves a flaming critique of another commenter. There’s plenty in what follows Jennifer’s essay to support that point of view.
Some commenters agree with Jennifer, some don’t; some consider her naïve, some defend her right to her opinion; some critique Jennifer for obviously being privileged, others wonder why anyone would try to shoot down an earnest teenager for having an opinion; some state their opinion of government intervention in our lives; some flame Maureen for not running articles on their preferred topics (although if they’d write good ones themselves, she might); some refer to the good old days of their own education when life was simpler and better; some criticize the teaching profession, and some criticize colleges of education for not preparing better teachers; some speak out against grade inflation; and a lot of them throw nasty stink bombs at other commenters for their comments or tone of their remarks.
Here’s what nobody says: Wow, that teacher sure did a great job.
Maureen introduces Jennifer as a student in the class of Joanna Anglin, and notes that Joanna was the Georgia Council of Teachers of English state Teacher of the Year in 2011.
I don’t know how many English teachers there are in Georgia in grades 7-12, but I bet there are a whole lot, and Joanna was judged by her peers to be Best in Show last year. She’s won a lot of other teaching awards as well, as this article reports, including one for being the Rockdale County Technology Integrating Teacher of the Year. I single this honor out because Jennifer’s essay is very much anti-technology.
So you can’t say that Joanna’s students are obligated to write opinions that please their teacher’s politics and sensibilities. Rather, what they need to do is argue their points responsibly.
Now, I’m Joanna’s doctoral program advisor at UGA, so I do have a dog in this fight. I’ve also coauthored two studies with her, one that took place in her classroom; and I’ve included examples of her teaching in my own publications about how to teach writing (she is featured in this book). I acknowledge my own self-interest in bragging that she’s a first-rate teacher and is learning how to become a first-rate educational researcher. So there, I’ve already gotten the ball rolling by flaming myself, albeit rather generously.
My point in writing, however, is not the aggrandizement of Jennifer, Joanna, or myself. Rather, it’s to point out that even people who write admiringly of Jennifer seem to think that she produced her essay on talent alone, or has become a skilled writer solely on the basis of her privileged social status. I don’t know Jennifer; I don’t know if she lives in a trailer home or in Lakeview Estates. All I do know is that she has written an impressive, well-argued essay, not just for a 15-year-old but for anyone entering these debates. I wonder how many of her readers and commenters could come up with something better. I say this not because I entirely agree with her, but because I think that she expresses her views cogently and clearly, and does so using examples and evidence from a nice combination of her personal observations of her peers and from sources she’s consulted.
How did she learn to write arguments so effectively? Not just by being talented, which she surely is. Rather, somebody taught her to write that way. Although I haven’t been able to visit Joanna’s classroom, I’m very familiar with how she teaches. Joanna doesn’t just give writing assignments. She carefully analyzes the goals of her teaching and designs activities and writing opportunities that walk students through a sequence of understandings that they’ll need in order to produce particular types of writing: narratives, arguments, and so on. She also allows for response and revision so that students’ writing is developed as a process involving many steps. It’s no wonder that her students write so articulately.
But in this era of teacher-bashing, Joanna’s teaching drew no comment whatsoever, even when she and her accomplishments served as part of the essay’s preface from Maureen. People who liked the essay praised the writer’s innate abilities and personal insight. Nobody seems to acknowledge that teaching writing is hard work for teachers, both in instructional design and the time it takes to grade well over a hundred essays and provide feedback to each student that is meaningful and useful. It’s much easier to assume that educators are all incompetent boobs and that only the lucky few like Jennifer can learn in spite of the teaching they must endure in those government schools.
I know Joanna well enough to know that a lot of Jennifer’s success followed from some dedicated teaching. I know a lot of other English teachers in this state who bring the same knowledge, commitment, and passion to their work. Without such teachers in English and other subjects, a lot of smart kids would not be performing at such high levels.
The fact that their outstanding performance gets crushed in the overwhelming negativity that surrounds schools in general saddens me greatly. There’s a lot of great teaching going on in our schools, if only we could see it through the vile rhetorical fog that obscures the public vision of what I consider to be one of our nation’s greatest assets: its public school system.
–From Maureen Downey, for the AJC Get Blog
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Lee
May 26th, 2012
11:42 pm
Methinks Smagorinsky doth protest too much. The earlier essay by Jennifer points out some of the idiocy of public school systems. Lack of rigor, grade inflation, multiple chances at “grade recovery”, and on the student’s side of the equation, overreliance on technology.
But yet, because this student can link a few paragraphs together in a fairly cohesive manner, Smagorinsky gets bent out of shape because nobody blogged about what a “great job her English teacher did”.
2 + 2 = 4
There. Now Smagorinsky can brag about what a great job my math teacher did….
northatlantateacher
May 27th, 2012
8:54 am
@AP: I am in a RttT district. We have not been told to exclude classical literature. The only thing we’ve been told is that we may not need to teach every line of a play or read every book cover to cover – and well, I already do this. There’s really no reason to read every line of say, Romeo and Juliet, for example. It is important for students to learn how to read and appreciate Shakespeare, but it is a lot more effective for them to read relevant current events tied to the themes of the play as part of the unit, rather than 5 weeks of straight Shakespeare: consequences of young love/acting irrationally, marriage customs, etc. Like it or not, kids really do not care to read any of the classics, and to make it accessible, relevant and interesting, it’s necessary to have a broader scope. That’s essentially what CC is about, unless I am gravely mistaken. Set me straight if I am.
I am still confused on the point you’re making. What does this have to do with colleges of education? What is the title of your book? Why all the secrecy?
To be clear on a couple of things, I’m not a fan of CC. It’s no better or worse than GPS, and it still requires a good teacher – amazing how you can’t change standards and have that equal effective teaching. The standards are only as good as the teacher (what a concept, right?) I’m upset that we took federal money for something we didn’t need. Took a carrot for a ride on a long and slippery slope. That I do not like, and what will likely cause me to search out some good private schools in years to come.
claytondawg
May 27th, 2012
9:22 am
Sadly, what “Digger” stated above is probably true in many cases in the state of Georgia where there are more students smarter than their teachers. Over my 34 years of classroom teaching, the quality of teachers has dramatically dropped. If this student has had ANY of the so-called “weak” teachers, it goes without saying that “students learn in spite of their teachers.” Her writing process began years ago; and, obviously, some great teaching from her own environment and desiring excellence for herself.
Attentive Parent
May 27th, 2012
9:31 pm
north atlanta- I want you to know you sound like a fabulous teacher . And I want you to be able to still teach the content your life experiences and the wisdom of the ages says matters.
If you have followed my comments I fight for students and teachers as long as knowledge is what drives them. What you have to fear is the definition of effective teacher under RTT. It is designed to change the classroom dynamic.
The book is called Credentialed to Destroy: How and why Education Became a Weapon. There’s no secret except I am not going to give full excerpts of what took me years to pull together.
I did make a conscious decision though to discuss what is happening now using all that knowledge in order to try to prevent things getting worse in the schools. I know what is happening and can safeguard my own children. I hurt for the busy parents and children who look at CC in good faith.
I hope you keep your classroom autonomy but that’s not the design. And when you get frustrated or want info, you know where to turn.
Good Luck.
Janet Barrow
May 28th, 2012
6:03 am
Rather than going through the nature-nurture arguments maybe we should consider that in varying weightings:
Success = innate ability + parental influence + teaching + life experience + opportunity + personal drive
Comments?
dbow
May 28th, 2012
9:26 am
The difference between a good teacher and a great teacher is passion and the ability to reflect on successes and failures and the willingness to make changes.
northatlantateacher
May 28th, 2012
9:35 am
@AP: I think I see where you’re going. We were told this year that the goal is for every teacher to give the same assessments at the end of a unit for “consistency”. That has nothing to do with CC; I was at another school under the GPS roll out and the message was the same.
I have major issues with this, as you might imagine. The unsaid reason is for teachers who are not as strong to be brought up – if the end assessment is more challenging than one they may use, their teaching will have to match. It’s the start of something I do not wish to do: have everyone in every classroom doing the same thing on the same day. That will be the year I leave the public classroom.
It’s funny, but it will have the same unintended consequence as NCLB did for the student: the best and the brightest teachers will suffer, the mediocre will chug along like always, and the really terrible will be brought up to some arbitrary low point that’s just good enough to pass, but not good for much else.
There are a lot of things happening in public ed that make me get a knot in my stomach.
AlreadySheared
May 28th, 2012
12:50 pm
Teaching is like parenting – the emphasis is on giving, not getting.
For instance, Duke’s Mike Krzyzewski could well get up at the end of a championship season and talk, with complete honesty, about how his multiple national championships, final fours, sweet 16s and acc titles helped him prepare for the current run and how the constant over all of that achievement has been not his players, but him. Since he is both an incredibly classy guy and very smart, you will of course never see him do this. He may be the coach, but the students do the work.
Likewise for any great teacher. It is the way of the world that praise for such a teacher has to come from his or her students. For it to be otherwise would be like a parent pointing to a child graduating summa cum laude, or winning the Nobel Prize, and saying “look, see what a good job I did.”
A great teacher’s reward IS the excellence of his or her students, and the great ones undrestand that without being told. Great teaching, as it were, is its own reward.